Heart Fate Stats
Once again I managed to cut 60 pages...which was mostly tightening. Some paragraphs did squeak a little when I cut, but a lot of it was sloppy writing...Many "I thinks....." and "Now" and "Even" and "Still"
Stuff sorta like: He thought he might consider how to decide regarding....
instead of: He decided...
Anyway here are the before and after stats:
I'm very pleased with the polishing and the book...paced a lot yesterday when I rearranged and cut some scenes...then, of course, the printer screwed up and it took me 3 hours to print 2 copies....
Sigh.
May all your electronics work smoothly today!
Robin
Stuff sorta like: He thought he might consider how to decide regarding....
instead of: He decided...
Anyway here are the before and after stats:
I'm very pleased with the polishing and the book...paced a lot yesterday when I rearranged and cut some scenes...then, of course, the printer screwed up and it took me 3 hours to print 2 copies....
Sigh.
May all your electronics work smoothly today!
Robin
posted by FantasyAuthor RobinDOwens | 7:49 AM
2 Comments:
You might find interesting to look at covercafe.com if you have not seen it yet. Cover Contest 2006 had very nice ones.
Thank you! I did nominate Protector of the Flight at the proper time, we'll see how that goes.
Guess I can do the same for Keepers of the Flame.
Robin
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