Critique

Critique today. We were a very small bunch (4) and worked on a historical romance; women's fiction with paranormal elements, romantic suspense (Mentor's Intrique proposal), and Heart Change.

No terrible stuff to be fixed by anyone. I have editing comments and to add a couple of reactions, a bit more anxiety....

Anyway, going to a booksigning of a fellow RMFW author.

May you all enjoy the autumn day.
Robin