Critique -- After

Well, there were 5 of us. Uproarious conversation, hard work. Only three of us read. I was not the most tortured writer. We spent a lot of time on a friend's work. I was the 2nd most hard critiqued. I need to torture Tinne more. Add the stakes, rachet up the tension...

So I'm feeling relatively good about Heart Fate.

May you find what you need today.
Robin